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🗣️ JP Campaign 2
2 rewrites, Do's and Don'ts
Sup creator 👋🏾
Today I'll be breaking down 2 follow up emails from Jordan Platten.
If you don't know what I'm talking about, you can check the "JP Campaign 1".
This email came on 30th Nov 👇🏾
“SL: 4 Hours
I hope you’re opening this before midnight, Danishvir...
Because the DFY foundations + mentorship deal is still alive and kicking."
But at midnight?
The offer is ending.
Get a road map, mentorship and community for growing your agency…
Make anywhere from $1,000 to $5,000+/mo with each client you sell…
So if you want to have me build an agency for you…
And run a leaner, more profitable business…
No matter your experience.
[Click here, book a call and find out more.]"
He's making those same promises again which he made in JP Campaign 1.
"You’ve got 5 hours.
Don’t miss out.
I probably won’t offer to build agencies for people ever again.
Jordan”
The hypocrisy would be epic for him to launch something same again.
Because we all know such creators.
Still, excuses are millions.
Just pick one to do it AGAIN.
This email came on 2 Dec 👇🏾
“SL: Good News"
Nothing to explain. His subs got it.
"Quick update about my Black Friday offer:
After our launch ended on Friday…
My inbox flooded with messages like these:"
( A guy messages to Jordan about how he wanted to get in so hard but he couldn't for some reason and asked if he could just have a meeting w/ them)
"Now, I don’t usually make exceptions…
However…
With today being Cyber Monday…
I’ve made a last minute decision to open up our special offer for just 4 more aspiring agency owners…"
This is the main part of the email.
For some reason, i like it a lot.
It could actually be a coincidence,OR…
"[Click here to take advantage (LIMITED SPOTS)]
Talk soon, Jordan Platten"
OR…it could be planned. Just a theoryđź§Şđź”
The thing is, it may or may not be planned,
But you can do so.
Creates a sense of urgency.
One LAST shot at one LAST opportunity.
Okay, exaggerated it A BIT...
If I had to rewrite:
List the benefits and agitate more on problems.
Make it seem like a golden chance, AGAIN.
Do's and Don'ts:
✔️ Plan ahead. Think beyond out of the box 🤓. We don't know if Jordan did it or not, but you surely can.
❌ Short fluff follow up emails
❌ No problem-listing, agitation, benefits, dream outcome reminder, FOMO etc.
My opinion for you:
Would you ever miss any chance at any time?
It's settling for mediocrity.
Make those emails as good as you can.
as you can.
-Danish; The Profit Plot